An engineering drawing should be clear, concise, and complete. Can someone here guide me through what I might be missing in my drawing or what I might be doing wrong. I'll attach a sample 3d drawing and its drawing version.

Please mention things like If I have unnecessary dimensions, too many dimensions and especially comment on the title block. One question specifically about that: how do you know if the drawing is in first or third angle of view?

Thanks,

Jaspreet Singh